This is about a sophomore in High school who puts a mask on, and empty bullet and robs a sales store. His coach is with him the whole way.
"To realize if they're gone – to incarceration or to violence – they've left a hole in the fabric of something. A family, a team, the heart of a coach who won't walk away. " This is the best line because it clearly sums up the whole column in one. It shows that coach's are really there for you like family.
http://www.cincinnati.com/story/opinion/columnists/krista-ramsey/2014/03/29/krista-ramsey-desales-market-robbery/7071067/
This author used many used of syntax and Diction. She refers to the reader as "You" no matter what the situation is she makes you feel like it is in your life.
Like when she says "Still, you should know that Coach Cheatham was standing right outside it through your entire hearing." She is putting you in the situation to make it more fun to read. She also uses many Rhetorical questions and sentences of telegraphic length.
If I were to meet this author I would ask her why she likes to write so much. What gives you inspiration to read?
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